Sunday, November 28, 2010

Ophelia's Role in the Tragedy, attempt one.five

In the play Hamlet, the role of Ophelia can be overlooked. On the outside, she seems like a character who is put in by the playwright simply for background. However, this is not so. Ophelia has a very large role in the play in several main ways.

The first of these ways is that she is a tool for Hamlet's use throughout. Chronologically speaking, the first time he begins to use her is for sex. On the exterior, there appears to be no evidence of this within the play, and therefore many people may think I'm talking nonsense. However, on a close analysis of Ophelia's singing in Act four, scene five, it appears that her father's warnings in Act One came much too late. Ophelia sings of being spurned by Hamlet just moments after they had had sex. Her words “To-morrow is Saint Valentine's day, All in the morning betime, And I a maid at your window, To be your Valentine. Then up he rose, and donn'd his clothes, And dupp'd the chamber-door;” suggest in no uncertain terms that, sometime in February, probably Valentine's Day, Hamlet made love to Ophelia, then swiftly got up from the bed, redressed, and left the room without a word. This shows Ophelia as a tool for Hamlet's gain as no self-respecting woman in the time of Shakespeare would have had sex with a man without coercing or a promise of marriage, it being seen as important that women remain virginal until the time of marriage. This idea of a promise or betrothal continues as she continues singing. “Quoth she, before you tumbled me, You promised me to wed. So would I ha' done, by yonder sun, An thou hadst not come to my bed.” seems to suggest that Hamlet did indeed promise to marry her before he 'tumbled' her, as she puts it, but then, after they have rolled in the hay, she goes to him, possibly a few days after they did it, and asks after the wedding. As an answer to this, she is told that actually, he would have married her if she was still a virgin. This meant that, even though she thought she was securing her future, because Hamlet is two-faced she has actually ruined all hope of ever getting married.

More evidence to support the fact that this happened is shown in Act Three, when Hamlet says to Ophelia “Get thee to a nunnery”. Whilst this might be to get her out of the way whilst Hamlet has his justice (as he has promised us since Act One), it is most likely to be because Ophelia is entirely likely to be pregnant, owing to the either lack or complete absence of contraception during Shakespearean times. Nunneries would take in pregnant girls from rich families back then, and so would have taken her in, looked after her during her pregnancy, and then converted her to a nun after the birth. Previous to this, there is further evidence, even before Ophelia's singing, that he has spurned her.
HAMLET : You should not have believed me; for virtue cannot so inoculate our old stock but we shall relish of it: I loved you not.
OPHELIA: I was the more deceived.
This implies that there was something Hamlet told Ophelia something that she shouldn't have believed, to do with her virtue and Hamlet's family (“our old stock”). This, if applied to the theory that Hamlet and Ophelia fornicated, then this could be Hamlet telling Ophelia that he never loved her because, whilst virginity won't continue the royal line, it's something relished upon and desired in a wife. Ophelia's answer shows her realising that she was used purely for sex, and she didn't really mean anything to Hamlet whatsoever.

It is not only Hamlet, however, who uses her as a tool. Her own father also does as much, with King Claudius going along with the idea. When they are trying to figure out whether or not Hamlet has truly gone mad, they plant Ophelia as bait in a hall, and secret themselves behind curtains so that they can spy on the events taking place. This application of Ophelia as general dogsbody shows that Polonius and Claudius have little concern for what may happen to her. Considering the fact that Hamlet has already been physical with her, grabbing her wrist in a moment described in Act Two, the fact that Ophelia's father doesn't seem to worry for her safety as she is left alone portrays her as someone considered more of an object than a person, strengthening the point that Ophelia is included in the play possibly just for the use of others.

It is possible that with these scenes, Shakespeare intended to make the audience feel affection and sympathy for her, as she is bashed about from abusive relationship to abusive relationship, be it between she and Hamlet or she and Polonius. On the other hand, Shakespeare may himself only be using Ophelia as a tool. Without her occasional input, the plot falls apart and the final scene may never have come about. For example, if we consider the fact that it is only declaring love for the departed Ophelia at her funeral that reveals Hamlet to Laertes et al, allowing Laertes to challenge Hamlet to the duel that ends in the death of the entire Danish royal family.
He might also be using her to portray another side of Hamlet. If we are to believe what Ophelia sings in Act Four, Hamlet promises her marriage if she goes to bed with him, then tells her he cannot marry her because she is no longer a virgin. Shakespeare could here be showing us that Hamlet is already two-faced and possibly scared of committing. This might then indicate that the reason Hamlet decided to fake madness after learning of the murder of his father, rather than doing what would then have been considered just, which would have been killing Claudius.
Shakespeare could be using her to heighten the tragedy as well. The main moments that influence how she ends are not shown within the acting, simply spoken about later. This increases the tragedy because Ophelia is simply being overlooked by the playwright at times when she is frightened, or her character is being developed the most. To extend this her perhaps most defining moment, that in which she and Hamlet make love to each other, can be missed out entirely by watching audiences because the language in which she describes it is ambiguous and can be put purely on the ravings of a madwoman.

Another role for Ophelia in the play is that of a whole tragedy unto herself. Evidence of this is displayed throughout. We begin when she seems to be at her prime, a beautiful young woman with a prince as a boyfriend. This swiftly goes downhill, when said boyfriend begins to display signs of madness, and playing her on. For example, in the beginning of act three, she is cast aside by Hamlet, who tells her to “get thee to a nunnery” and that he never loved her. Later on, within the same act, he has his head in her lap, making innuendo and flirtation. This already is making her life distinctly harder, but when Hamlet mercilessly slaughters through a curtain in the same day, it appears that she is sent utterly insane with this as the final nail in the coffin of her sanity. Possibly even the final nail in her own coffin, as not long later she is drowned without any way to tell if it was accidental or suicide. This way of going, long and drawn out, could be considered something of a prolonged tragic scream. This particular scream stretches over several acts until it is silenced.

She also has a role in that she adds to Hamlet's tragedy.  By spurning her ("get thee to a nunnery" act three, and also the apparent earlier spurning as made apparent in Ophelia's madness songs), he is getting rid of the one woman he loves, as he does love her, which we find out when he discovers her dead and leaps into her grave in Act Five.   This adds to his tragedy as well as her own because, if he was really in love with her, Hamlet may have thought that it was possible to redeem himself in her eyes after he has killed his uncle in revenge. He may even have wanted to marry her, as he says “Be buried quick with her, and so will I” indicating that he doesn't want to continue living without her, and would much rather be buried along with her.

In conclusion, Ophelia's role in tragedy could seem to an outsider one that is basic and even a side story to the main plot. When looked at with hindsight, she can be seen as a major role with many levels. Saying this, it is my belief that her main role is one of a tool for the use of others, as this is how she appears most frequently. In fact, she only really appears of her own accord, and not at the direction of a family member, once she has lost all her inhibitions and madness has become her master.

Tuesday, November 16, 2010

My Mind Map Plan, But Translated To Don Language.

(My apologies for hideous typos, wireless keyboard running low on batteries)
 Key for highlightednessnosity
Act One
Act Two
Act Three
Act Four
Act Five
 Vague notes
Adding to H's pain
H forced to cast her aside
Already lower class
Maybe pregnant
She thinks ill of him (innuendo, nunnery)
Why is she there?
Princes of Hamlet's age require heirs - shows H's life going well until occurances of play?
Tool for H (Trousers, nunnery, play, grave fighting)
Tragic element in herself (life going well, boyf goes nuts, boyf kills dad, she goes mad, kills self either accidentally or on purpose yet real intentions questionable as of madness)
Used by all (sex, madness, investigation, excuse to duel)
What was Shakey thinking?
Sex before act 1 - Wants to look like average castle or like they had a chance of being together?
Shows no major moments in Ophy's life - Not seeing heightens imagination of events, increasing tragedy?  - Invisibility of women?
Intro
In my opinion, two main questions to ask r.e. Ophelia's role.
Why is she there?
How is she adding to Hamlet's pain?
Q. can be answered by analysing each section she is in in each scene

Para one,
Act one,
Brother leaves, leaving Ophy without main source of protection
Dad forbids her to go near H - Tragic in itself, as they may be in love, or she may be up the duff. 
She's there because it provides H with element of life already going down tube, love is lower class etc.
Heightens pain simply by existing. ( I know what I mean)
Para two, act two
Trousers scene. - Ophy quite traumatised.
She's stopped writing to him.
Trousers scene traumatising maybe because she knows is improper, is shocked to see he who she is avoiding, rejects him again.
She's there as is being used as a tool by H, main reason she is there, really, just a tool used, very topical as women's rights were rubbishy back then.  Women used for babbies and no more!!
Causes H pain because he may be in love with her and she rejects over and over
Para three, act three
Nunneryism - Ophy cast aside, used again but by father (supposed protector) and kingy.
Play - H uses innuendos and the like just after he casts her away, head in lap, seems like he is undecided, confusing her into insanity? (Not literally, though probably cause in long run)
H kills her dad.
There again as a tool; by rejecting then taking Ophy back, H seems more mad, maybe giving into desires. 
ADding to H's pain, seems "cool" about him not being around, if he loves her that would sting.
Para 4, act 4, longest para tbh
Boyf chops up dad's body, hints at hiding in food.
Singing -
-Sex
  -With H
  -H gets up and leaves
-Death
  -Own?
  -Love?
  -H?
  -Polonius?
Drowns -
-Traigc as just had found happiness (be it also madness)
-Playing
  -Eventual innocence and joy.
-Wreaths of flowers
  -Funeral tradition!!
  -Knew was dying, therefore?
  -Childlike, daisy chains etc.
-Allows self to die
  -Slips from willow tree, apt as weeping willow
  -Preggers, then?
  -Singing
  -Knew/ignorant to danger?
Why is she there?  Entire act is great big massive tragic scream for her.
H's pain?  Not much atm, but when he comes back he's gonna be pretty upset his girlfriend's dead, having been driven mad by him pretending to be mad. (yes yes, debateable.)
Para five, act five
Debated if she should be buried in church, as suicide poss.
H ignorant
H discovers death in very insensitive manner, jumps in grave in despair.
Ophy's death possibly used to intitiate duel.  Could mean she is being used as tool AGAIN. Also could mean indirectly causes death of pretty much everyone but Horatio and Osrick. (And some Norwegians, but really, they just turn up at the last bit and are of little to no real consequence).

Conclusion.
Ophy's role is to be used, as women were, as a tool for men to get what they want, and could be classed in herself, in my opinion, a tragic device (literally!!)

Monday, November 15, 2010

A Personal Opinion on Nick Carroway

(Why Don?  You know I'll only rant!)
From the first few pages of the novel, already I am taking a deep disliking to Nick.
It is not because he has money, or can go to an Ivy League college, or because he seems like an intelligent man.
It's because he is already starting to grate on me in that he seems obsessed about class and status and exactly what he did over the last few years of his life.
I'll be honest, I already read the rest of the novel, and the feeling I get from the first chapter in that he is basically just a messenger is only excacerbated by the fact that really, he seems to be lacking in any kind of personality.
All I can get from these few pages is that he has money, and he does banking, and he's practically in love with this man Gatsby.
Bankers. Ugh.  So very boring.  And completely and entirely inconsequential. 
I would be fascinated by this character if something interesting had happened to him.  He was in the Great War, so why are we not told of some enormous achievement from during his time in France?
He moved across the country, so surely something more interesting than meeting a fellow who asked him directions happened to him?  Please?
Honestly, he is just a blank canvas to me at the moment.  Dull, and barely there. 
And really, if the most exciting encounter he had with another human being was "Do you know the way to the West Egg?" then he has clearly not travelled far enough, and should try Mexico or something.  Maybe Canada.
I honestly think very little than general dislike for him.
"Yes, I went to New Haven, but people are bores".  CLEARLY you are not listening to the people, Nick.  People are fascinating.  People have stories about wars and murders and bombs and stuff!!   LISTEN TO THEM.  If you don't have any interesting stories of your own to tell, you could at least have told us some of the initimate secrets divulged to you.
"I'm going to be a banker."  Oh dear.  Money stuff, for a man whose family have enough money to support him without a job for a whole year.  People like him make me feel fairly ill at ease with the world.
In conclusion, for the first few pages of The Great Gatsby, I have not been endeared to Nick Carroway.

Sunday, November 14, 2010

A Detailed Plan For An Essay

Dear Don (yes, another one of those posts),
Am finding it much more useful to create a plan via spider diagram, and would be happy to scan it for you onto the blog at some point in the not very distant future.  Will very unlikely be before the lesson tomorrow, as sleep is also quite high on my list of priorities.
And also my computer is acting up.
Will bring plan on paper to our lesson, commit to the internet as soon as possible afterwards.
Hope you had a good weekend
Maddy :)

Monday, November 8, 2010

Chapter One Of TGG

(I'll be honest.  I didn't like TGG.  Not until the end, when things got bloodthirsty.)

The starting chapter in TGG begins by explaining a little about the narrative character, Nick Carraway.  He comes from a fairly posh family full of bankers, and apparently snobs.  It is roundabouts the Twenties, and in America, with Nick being fresh out of university.  He is travelling away from home, toward the home of his cousin Daisy Buchanan, and her husband Tom, who Nick was friends with in "college".  He gets a house on the West Egg, across from the East Egg where most of the posh people live.  This house on the West Egg is coincidentally next door to Gatsby's.  Gatsby is described as a great, wonderful man.  
Nick goes for dinner at Daisy and Tom's, during which he meets Jordan Baker, who is apparently rather good at tennis, and hears an argument between Daisy and Tom about Tom having a lover. 
After the dinner, Nick sees Gatsby hovering in the garden, but he disappears before getting a moment to talk.

This is basically naught but an explanatory chapter, discussing a few of the characters but none in any particular depth.   It also gives a little backstory to the majority of the characters, although Gatsby remains a mystery feature, with no real evidence that he even really exists.  He may be at this point a figment of Nick's imagination, almost like an imaginary friend. 
There isn't really all that much to write about chapter one, as nothing major really happens.  The evidence of Tom's mistress will become a major issue, but in the chapter it it just brushed over with the dinner continuing and it not being mentioned again.  Certainly having read the novel, I know it will become a huge plot key.  However within the chapter itself there is not really all that much to discuss, simply a little bit of narrative on a dinner with an outwardly happy family who clearly has cracks in it like every goshdarn family on the planet!!

An Essay Title

Dear Don.
I'm not entirely sure how to phrase my title, but I'm sure that by the time you have read this I will have discussed Ophelia's madness songs with you, discovered a decent and proper essay title that will make me look like a right smart arse, and begun to make a delightful plan that will for certain allow me to achieve an A*, which will then get me a scholarship to uni, reducing my uni costs, and maybe even getting me to Cambridge, which would just be a laugh, as I am not remotely posh.  However, it would be a delightful bonus for my cousins, as they live in Cambridge, and I could just move in with them, and babysit the babies they will inevitably have after they get married and discover that a life without children is a life without joy or some such whatnot.  Cheers muchly.
Mads

                                                (Where I would like to be.)

Friday, November 5, 2010

Analysis Of Two Hands

The structure of the poem is in one continual stanza, and is essentially the train of thought of a son sitting in his room whilst his father stays up late reading medical journals.  This includes the literary feature of enjambement, as the lines continue past the end of the physical lines, as though the man's thoughts were running away with him and not forming proper sentences. 

The tone of the poem is sort of contemplative, with the son comparing his hand to his father's hand, finding both similarities and differences.  This may be because, while he loves his father (so seeing similarities between them), there are very obvious differences, which may show the separation between the two of them.  This might be because his father is a very accomplished surgeon (the poem mentions that the father can complete easily thirteen surgeries in a day. 
He compares their hands, both the same size and shape, yet he says they have nothing else in common but that.  This might suggest that he envies the brilliance of his father's hands, and wishes that he could be his father; this may especially be true when combined with the fact that later in the poem, he says his hand may have the chance to be just like his father's.
This feeling and tone of ambition, admiration, and yet distance may indicate that the narrative voice is a child, or maybe the author is writing it from his feelings as a child. 
The language suggests this second option, as it is very formal language, filled with imagery, which would either indicate some kind of child genius or a grown up. 
The theme seems to be admiration, yet annoyance at his father.  He indicates that his father spends many nights up late, maybe meaning that they don't spend any time together at all.  This may be the reason for the distance between them.